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Smooth animation, a decent variety of dramatic camera angles, AWESOME likeness to the real game... This was pretty good! My only gripe is that the ending was a little abrupt. Maybe you could have had a more conclusive ending. But otherwise, a solid animation!

I thought the pencil one was really good!

I can easily say that these Bogaturs cartoons and the Versus cartoons are my favorite series on Newgrounds. Hands down. Amazing job.

Not a bad flash! The plot wasn't the most original and it was a little short, but you did a pretty nice job at delivering it. My suggestions: you could improve your comedic timing a little bit to make the jokes really hit home (I appreciated the "take a heart" joke and the ending jump haha (and the 'LISTEN!' reference?), but I think a little extra pause could have given a little time to let the jokes really set in).

The things I didn't like was the kind of random tweening of sonic when everyone was laughing and the swearing (I thought it was a little much for an otherwise innocent and funny cartoon). Otherwise I thought the voice acting was solid. The toad voice was spot-on.

Two things about the movie itself: the soumd quality isn't the best at times and it seems like the height of the video is off (I see white rectangles at the top.)

Anyway, keep going at it! You guys definitely have potential to make bigger and better stuff. Your jokes are pretty funny, but with a little better timing, (and maybe less swearing) you could make something really hilarious.

Raccatoons responds:

Thanks for your support! I really appreciate viewers like you. Also when Mario said listen I didn't intend for it to be a reference but hey that's cool that you took it that way!
Next time I'll have better audio and improved comedic timing. I'm starting to get the hang of this. If you want to check out my youtube channel it's MoonCoontheLoon. Thanks!

You really don't see actual pencil and paper animations that often anymore. While this movie doesn't break any new ground in the "epic supernatural power battle" type of cartoon, I have to appreciate the animation (even if it's not completely done yet!). Definitely keep going on this project. It looks very promising, especially for a first time!

Eggmanslim responds:

thank you very much! i just stumbled upon this website and have been working on many animations prior! cannot wait to post them all on here and SO GLAD that this community is actually responsive! thx for the feedback! you will definitely see more and very soon! XD
future animations will never be as lazy btw ;)

I love these Versus shorts! This one's a little short, but it's creative and super funny. I'm going to go watch the rest of them!

Love everything about it. The sound effects, the humor, and most importantly the style. Awesome job!

Awesome!

I can't get over how much I love your animation style. Everything's all so wiggly! Haha it cracks me up every time (especially the fingers). Keep up the awesome job, I can't wait until the next one :)

Good!

But the ball seemed to fly by itself sometimes.

Pretty good.

It would have been a lot better if you made a scene or an animation for some or all of them.

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Ty @TyyobrO

Age 28, Male

2D Animator

Tufts University

Massachusetts , USA

Joined on 7/20/07

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